These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Technology plays a big part in our lives more than it used to be; technological devices,
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as phones and computers, are primary equipment for everyone. Some people say it is easier to
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; I consider that remote working is not for everyone, and the advantages could not outweigh the disadvantages.
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remote working can be beneficial for several reasons,
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as reduced transportation
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or flexible working
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, it is clear that the
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employees
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spend
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, the more energy they have left for
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. So,
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at
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could make
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have more energy for
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.
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, the
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feel more relaxed in their usual environment; relaxation is sometimes good for those who
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in arts and design. People generate new ideas better with a clear mind.
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, working under relaxed surroundings cannot initiate any pressure, which sometimes requires pushing the
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through a deadline. Working without pressure could result in
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' less productivity.
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, a distraction from the
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atmosphere. The latter can be in different forms; noise, light, or even the internet
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. The internet
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is essential for working remotely due to meetings or transferring information. If the
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lose a network
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during an important meeting, their team members might not continue their
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in
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.
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, it makes an online meeting more
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-consuming than a face-to-face meeting. To sum up,
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at
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can benefit the individuals in terms of reducing travel
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to
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, but there are several drawbacks
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as distractions from pets or losing
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during a meeting; none of these issues is in the office.
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