Human activities is damaging the Earth or making it a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree?

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decades, the number of populations on the earth

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to billions. With the urge to fulfil all their needs, they are exploiting the globe ever since their creation. These

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of activities

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provoking a question

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they will

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the destruction in the world they are living

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they will improve their place to live. I personally believe that the appearance of human

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on the earth will

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more damage. In

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essay, I will cover the reasons behind my opinion. No one can argue that the real reason behind building the civilization is to make a better home for all of us, but without the care for surrounding ecosystems, more damages will

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to our world.

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of all, the development of big cities without any good city plan will

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destruction

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of the natural ecosystems.

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, the massive development of reclaimed land to be

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complex will

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a disruption and kill the living creatures

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the beach and the sea.

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, it will

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make the fisherman suffer.

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, the massive exploitation of

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natural resources without any blueprint to make them sustainable will

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be a reason behind the damage globe. Take the intense use of

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fuel during the

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decade

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for

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example,

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lead to the depleted amount of oil and gasses around the world. We have known that both of

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this resource

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could not sustain.

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, societies tend to explore more in search of other

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resulting

more

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damage everywhere.

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, our daily activities leave a massive amount of trashes, including undegradable one which

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the life of many animals. In summary, with some reasons that I explained in the previous paragraph, I believe that any human activities which focus solely on our advantages will make our planet a worse place to live.

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, there is a need

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better planning which involved the care of surrounding nature to make

earth

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a better place for living.