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University Education should be free to eveyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

#university #education #eveyone #income #diasgree
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Education is a vital part of human life, without it we are like people with closed eyes. It's everyone's right to get the necessary education to get a job or anything a person wants to buy in his/her life. Well, I cannot agree here as there are so many challenges that
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 have to face if they free the education and I am going to explain my opinion in the following paragraphs.
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 with, we all want to
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 in
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 or either in colleges with good reputations. But, proving free
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 is a big challenge for any educational institute.
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, they have to pay salaries to all the professors which are not easy as they are not getting any financial help from anyone. There is a limited budget provided by the government to
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 and there can be more than one university in the same city or area. So it's not easy to provide
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 in free.
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, In ,
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 people come all across the world. There can be more than 100 students in one session. providing them access to professional material like books, professional studies and presentations can be hard as well, because most of the
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 material is expensive nowadays so giving these things in free can be a challenge in
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 and can possibly affect the quality of a
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.
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 but not least, I personally think that studying in university is every individual's dream and it's hella expensive for middle-class families. The one thing they can do is make it affordable so everyone can afford to
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 there.
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