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Some people think public libraries are necessary, others believe that the public libraries are useless. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Getting knowledge about history, politics, science and business is important for everyone. In the modern world
libraries
 is the easiest way to access all the necessary information. Some
people
 think that
libraries
 help them on a regular basis, while some folks think that
libraries
 are not really important for us. I am going to discuss both statements in the following paragraphs and going to my personal thoughts on them.
To begin
 with, the majority of the
people
 think that
libraries
 are something that needs to be everywhere from small towns to megacities. According to them, anyone can go to
libraries
 regardless of their age, colour or class. Poor students can
also
study
 their material as well because it's free of cost and
also
 one of the best ways to make connections or social bonds. According to a survey on WES 74% of
people
 go to
libraries
 on a daily basis for various reasons. Moving forward, Some folks think that
libraries
 are waste of time and energy. They think that majority of young generation choose to sit in a library
instead
 for spending time with elder ones as
this
 is their one of the biggest reason to hate it. Some
also
 think that in the modern world they have access to every information through the internet, but they still choose to
study
 alone in a place where you can not even speak, as it affects the brain negatively.
Last
 but not least, I personally think that
libraries
 are something we all need, whether we want to
study
 there or just want to sit quietly. The younger generation
also
 needs to stop avoiding older
people
 for the sake of studies. I personally balance everything in life, I like to spend time with my grandparents and
also
 go to the library for
study
 purposes.
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