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The spread of multinational companies and resulting increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the advancement of multinational enterprises and
resulting
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 development of globalization can bring out positive effects for everyone. I believe that it would be beneficial
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 majority
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 of everyone.
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 trend produces the rapid development of the economy in the capital-scarce,
labor-rich
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countries
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 as developing
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.
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 is because
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 movement has increased job opportunities. To illustrate
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, FOXCONN is a convincing example. It is an electronics contract manufacturer based in SHENZHEN of China that producing electronic products for most developed
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.
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,
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 factories are likely to get local people involved in
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 and lift them out of poverty. Meanwhile, it
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 the people who live in developed
countries
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 through fiercely marketing competitive with the chance to have a wide array of choices because of low
labor
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 costs.
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, the consumers could buy goods at much lower prices than local online shops through the Chinese online platform SHEIN.
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, the customer could shop with a lot of cost-effective products.
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, the biggest problem of
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 trend is that
jobs
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 are lost and transferred to
lower cost
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countries
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. According to conservative estimates by Robert Scott of the Economic Policy Institute, granting China
most
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favored
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 nation status drained away 3.2 million
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, including 2.4 million manufacturing
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. For that reason, workers in developed
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 like the US face pay-cut demands from employers who threaten to export
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. In conclusion, the spreading of multinational companies leads to
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the expansion
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 of globalization contributes a lot to
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most
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, it has
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 side too.
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