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3. Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Few
people
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 think that persons who are interested in reading
books
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 can have more
imagination
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 and
language
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 command than the individuals who prefer to watch TV. I agree with
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 statement and
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 essay shall discuss the rationale behind my opinion. I believe that those
people
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 who read more
books
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 definitely develop predominance in
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 and imaginary power because the
books
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 always provide new ideas and plenty of vocabulary.
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, while reading fiction
books
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, we create a virtual world in our subconscious mind, where the reader is immersed in and in the back of mind,
people
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 will try to solve the problems in that particular circumstance with their own
imagination
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. Each page in the book moves the reader more deeply into the topic,
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 it improves the
imagination
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 skill. Thrillers, action and adventure, classics and drama are other examples that increase
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 ability.
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, literature
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 and scientific
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 always enhance knowledge and command of the
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 by improving vocabulary and collocation usage.
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, watching television does not provide the chance to develop our
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 and
imagination
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 because while watching TV shows, visual and auditory system of human body simultaneously gets engaged in the audio and the pictorial representation of the program,
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 of concentrating in
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 presentation and prediction of
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 scene.
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, fast movements in the screen reduce the time gap between visuals, which in turn reduces the capability to concentrate on the content. To conclude, reading
books
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 has a great positive impact on the imaginary power of a person.
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, compared to
people
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 who prefer to watch television, it helps to enhance their
language
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 skills.
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