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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people. Others think that the purpose of museums is to educate, not to entertain. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Museums represent the
culture
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 and heritage of respective nations across the globe. While many believe that they should be entertainment
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 to attract youth, others think that they are meant for only
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 and should not be treated as refreshment sources. In
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. The purpose of art galleries is meant to educate
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 about their respective nation's
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 and history. To be more precise, from ancient times archaeologists are finding valuable items during their research and preserving them at a common place to educate
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 about our past history. The skeletons of dinosaurs preserved in the renowned museum in England,
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, educates and helps citizens to believe the existence of the extinct species. Else, it would have remained as an unknown animal in the whole universe.
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, it is suggested to consider these
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 as a source of
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,
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, in
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 contemporary world, I opine that
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 are not attracted to visit
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 without entertainment.
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,
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 have become tourist destinations to generate revenue for the government with alluring shopping malls and restaurants. The famous Salarjung museum was constructed in the year 1957 in Hyderabad,
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 has got renovated recently to make it a tourist spot rather than a source of
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.
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, the majority of
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 are promoting
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 kind of
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 to improve the economy, which is
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 not a correct option in my opinion. In conclusion, art galleries should attract
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 and provide amusement, said by many
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,
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, others think that they should be treated purely as educational resources. I honestly believe that they should not stick to either of these ,
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 there should be a balance between both not only to represent our history and help and learn about them but
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 to entertain and attract
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 to know about the
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.

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