At present, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

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of young adults than older people. I believe that while comparing both aspects advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and

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essay shall discuss the rationale behind my opinion. Population explosion with young adults is a positive development in each nation.

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, it is due to the tremendous increase of workforce in the country.

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, it provides maximum manpower to

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region.

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, expansion in

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of youths at a particular place directly indicates the productive age group of the population and indirectly notifies the growth.

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of youngsters in China pulled out the best extract, which escalated the position of the country

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the world map. At present,

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developing republic is capable to compete with the United States of America.

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China became

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vendor for almost all countries worldwide.

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of old people indicates the health and general wellbeing of the country, it does not mean a positive trend in development because it is a burden to the government to take care

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non-productive citizens.

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, the old age people help society to maintain the demographic balance, providing support to the working men and women to develop family culture on their children, authorities have to spend a huge amount of money for the services offered the old.

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, in England, the old age homes and geriatric health care systems are managed by the government cause

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financial pressure on the economy of the nation. To conclude, while outweighing benefits and drawbacks, I reckon that

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of young adults than senior citizens is advantageous for the positive developments.