Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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global technological and economic growth can no longer occur at expense of our environment. Few would debate that, while industries and transport still rely on traditional

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, like

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fossil, newer

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of

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are required to guarantee a longer and more sustainable development. In

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, while explaining why alternative

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must replace the traditional ones.

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and foremost, still too many countries depend completely on coal and gas to supply their industrial sector.

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, despite being easier on in the short term, given it doesn’t require

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research and relies on solidified methods, depends on a very limited amount of

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, represented by

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fossil

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. Recent studies revealed that more than 80% of the global

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fossil has already been consumed and, by the end of 2050, all the storage known will be exhausted to provide for the global needs.

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, traffic and transport are made up for

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90% by gasoline engines and, despite the newer technologies available,

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will lead to the total consumption of oil resources alongside contributing to the global pollution through fumes emissions.

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, it is clear that sticking with the older and simpler

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to

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policies will not only lead to a catastrophe from an environmental standpoint but will

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inevitably lead to its own destruction once the global resources are completely consumed. In

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setting, several scientists, funded by ethical societies and companies, are paving the way for the development of newer environmentally friendly

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. There is no doubt that

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will be more expensive and laborious at the very beginning. In fact, renewable

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implants, like fields full of solar panels or wind turbines plants, require a lot of expenses both for their building and manutention.

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, the efficiency of these stations is still far from the desirable levels, since more advanced systems are still under development, as it happens for every new technology. Despite these initial limitations that may be felt like a downfall by many leaders and cabinets, investing in renewable energies like wind and wave turbines, solar panels, or hydroelectric dams, represents the only way to guarantee a continuous supply of

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for the generations to come. Interestingly, some cities have already based their energetic requirements on renewable

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. Recently, in London 80% of the houses’ heating

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has been produced from solar panels installed in North Greenwich,

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represents a clear example of

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, environmentally friendly policy. To conclude, in

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period of continuous changes and technological improvements,

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production must inevitably evolve and adapt to our planet’s needs and resources,

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ought not to be

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exhausted. Even though many nations still base their industrial production and transport on

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fossil

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technologic revolution should be sustained remains. In

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essay, I explained why switching the

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from a classic style, based on

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, gas, and oils, towards a more modern, sustainable, and eco-friendly one is a necessity that should not be debated.