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Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It is claimed that
schools
 play a vital role to educate
children
 about a healthy
diet
. Some argue that
parents
 should be responsible for teaching their
offsprings
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offspring
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 what good
food
 is. In my opinion, I believe that
schools
 and
parents
 are
equal
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an equal
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role
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roles
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 in guiding
children
 about a healthy
diet
. On the one hand, there are many reasons to believe in school's role
about
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in
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 teaching a healthy
diet
 for
children
.
Firstly
, teachers are the knowledgeable monitors for
kids
.
Children
 spent a lot of time in
schools
 and teachers teach them about the benefits of a healthy body
through
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by
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 guiding the
food
 that
children
 consume in each meal.
Therefore
,
children
 can easily absorb what they learn and apply them in life.
Moreover
, in
schools
children
 have
pratice
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practice
 time to use the knowledge about good
food
 in their
homeworks
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homework
 or their
lunchs
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lunch
lunches
.
On the other hand
,
parents
also
 contribute to form a good habit in
children
's eating. As
kids
are easily reflects
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 by the way their
parents
 eat,
children
 can copy it and eat like their
parents
.
For example
, my
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five-year-old
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five-years-old
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five-year-old
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 cousin likes to eat a lot of vegetables in each meal because she often observes the
food
 that her
parents
 eat every day. Another
reasons
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reason
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 is that
parents
 usually prepare meals for
kids
, so they will know which
food
 is good for their
children
 or not.
Therefore
,
parents
 can guide
kids
eat
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to eat
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 vegetables
instead
 of eating junk foods. In conclusion, having a healthy
diet
 for
children
 should be a combination
from
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of
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 both
parents
 and
schools
.
Children
 can apply the
knowlegde
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knowledge
 from school in each meal at home.
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