In many countries, more and more young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities. Why is this the case? Is this a good or bad thing?

Youths tend to immigrate from rural

areas

to urban

areas

more and more.

This

is because there

is

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more prosperities in the

cities

such

as education, jobs, economic and lifestyle. In my opinion,

this

is not quite a good thing, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view. Big

cities

in many countries around the world have more facilities than rural

areas

which would give a better life to teenagers. Especially in terms of

education

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there are better quality schools or universities which lead to getting a high salary job and

professional

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career in the future.

Furthermore

, there are more facilities

such

as transportation, shopping malls which make people’s lives easier and more convenient.

For example

, 80% of teenagers in rural

areas

in Thailand who had graduated high school go to continue to study at university in Capital city,

Bangkok

due to the top three universities of the country located in

Bangkok

.

Moreover

, most of them tend to find a job in

Bangkok

after graduating , the reason is that there are more chances to grow up in their career pathway and have various options. In my opinion,

this

is not quite a good thing because it will have an impact on many things. The most important thing is the

socio economic

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imbalance between urban and rural

areas

. In rural

areas

there will be a lack of

labor

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to do agriculture and

also

the elderly people will be left to live alone.

For instance

, according to the latest survey conducted by

Bangkok

University, it revealed that 80% of youth or young adults have been living in

Bangkok

or industrial

cities

for studying and working, which makes economic growth and persuades people to live more and more.

Therefore

,

this

tends to be a bad thing due to congestion in only big

cities

,

then

increasing the cost of living and not enough accommodation will be the result of

this

problem.

Thus

, the government should tackle

this

problem as soon as possible by distributing the jobs to rural

areas

and improving the quality of education to be the same in all countries. Many countries around the world are currently faced with the immigration of teenagers and young adults from rural to urban

areas

which have many bad consequences, in my opinion.

Therefore

, the government should tackle

this

problem as soon as possible.