convinience foods will become increasingly prevelant and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparing. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Due to the technological advances of the present context,
food
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processing
methods
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have
also
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become increasingly advanced and
therefore
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traditional
methods
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are being replaced by
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fast and efficient convenience
food
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. In my opinion, I agree with the statement and I will
further
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elaborate my perspective in
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essay.
Firstly
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, as the
people
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are busy with their day to day lives, they have invented
methods
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in order to make their lives easier and due to
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reason
people
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have found ways to improve their
food
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patterns that
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the
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lifestyles
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life styles
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. As
for
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an example, most
of
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the
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individuals are now using
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makers
instead
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of the traditional
coffee
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making with the use of jugs or they simply buy a
coffee
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from a
coffee
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shop on the way to their office.
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,
people
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are used to
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fast
food
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than
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home cooked
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food
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as it is convenient for them compared to earlier.
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, working mothers mostly give their children fast
food
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and junk
food
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since preparing a meal is
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. There are several equipment and machines that made life easy to produce
food
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nowadays.
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ancient
people
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have always used traditional
methods
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that are healthy and tasty at the same time. But due to the fact of
limited
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time these all
methods
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have currently been replaced by more convenient fast
methods
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. Since
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at
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the past
were
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working in paddy fields and
were
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more into agricultural occupations, they always had the motivation to prepare varieties of
food
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.
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, these
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are
also
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been replaced by
the
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modern
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and farmers
also
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use
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new equipment
to
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cultivation
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rather than
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traditional
methods
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. To conclude, I believe that traditional
methods
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of making
food
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are obviously replaced by modern
methods
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due to technological improvements in order to make a man’s life easier.
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