Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to share freely. discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Many people think that it is effective to share educational
information
such
as scientific research, business idea and
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academic to each other for making
new
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possibility
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of innovation. Whereas, others argue that it is too crucial to share unlimited. From my point of view, even the resource should be accessible, it should
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for keeping owner
data
safely. It is undeniable that all
information
guides us
some
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new ideas. In fact, we have to get
a
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various recourse supporting our thought and creativity.
For example
, using business
statistic
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for creating new strategy services and products.
Therefore
, there are many arguments about free accessing the
data
for making their product more reliable.
However
, there are some worrying factors about unlimited sharing
data
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.
First
, an effect in owner recourse, they may not be taken any credits for an original reference. Due to many
information
opening without fee, people do not concern about addressing the reference.
Moreover
,
this
may affect
to
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personal privacy
such
as using your
information
in
term
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of violence and sexual harassment. Because of showing
many
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information
without limit, anyone can distort one’s
data
to make
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joke
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or create fake news. Nowadays, there are contaminate
information
which
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is created
for
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discredit
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someone
in
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both online and offline. In that case, some
information
should be restricted for protecting our
data
. In conclusion, sharing ideas and academic research freely have many positive views.
On the other hand
, giving too much
information
may cause of using in
bad
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way
such
as copycat, discredit and creating fake
information
. In my opinion,
this
should be accessible with controlling the limit by making regulation which is made people aware of taking
a
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credit and protecting
an original
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original information
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information
.
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