Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Safety

issues

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the major concern of the modern era. A few individuals claim that slow down the speed of

autombiles

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automobiles

such

as

cars

and bikes are

the

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terrific method to decrease

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the number of

road

accidents, but the opponents have conflicting views. That essay will

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discuss both

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views,

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discuss my perspective about it in the subsequent paragraphs. The proponents of the

first

view said that people it is good to decrease the speed of vehicles in order to improve the

safety

on the

road

. In

this

way,

rider

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the rider

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can easily stop their

cars

or bikes before crashing

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any other two or

four

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four-wheeler

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wheeler

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. As the result, neither will occur any mishappening

on

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on-road

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road

nor any threat to life during riding on the vehicles. To cite an example,

Last

year, I was going to my town on my bike and at that time, there was fog in the surroundings, but I was riding my bike

not

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above the speed of

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forty

our

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meter

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per one hour.

Suddeny

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Suddenly

, a child came into my way, but I was

successfuly

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successfully

successful

stoped my bike since of low speed. The opponents of the

first

view claimed that there are other methods too to upgrade

road

safety

are ethier citizens should follow the traffic rules or Government should imply the

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rules for

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. In

this

law, one day only the

cars

who have

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number in the

last

should

allowed

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on the

road

as well as the

next

day for even number car.

Consequently

, it will lead to

less

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fewer

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chances of happening any risk of life or probably reduces the possibilities of car

carshings

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crashing

with each other.

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, in the year

of

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2019, the chief minister of

delhi

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,

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Arwind

kezriwal

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Kejriwal

was implement

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the

odd-even

law for

cars

. After that, the

numbers

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of

cars

accidents were reduced by 25% according to the data of

police

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department. In conclusion, it is believed that

although

road

safety

will improve by the

declining

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in the speed of

motobikes

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motorbikes

and

cars

,

but

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apply

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odd-even

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the odd-even

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rule is

more

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a more

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effective method than it.

Therefore

, it is better to establish the

odd-even

rule for improving

the

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road

safety

rather than slowing the vehicles speed.