Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important Environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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one of the country
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earnings between 2015 and 2016. The rates are in $
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table explained percentage fluctuation in several
export
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2015-2016 while engineered goods competitively
export
slightly lower
value
. Textile
export
industry
value
shows the lower percentage in 2015 and it drastically raise their
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in 2016 when agriculture
products
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2015 petroleum manufacture
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income was around 61
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have earned about 56
billion
in 2015 and it raised by 8.5% in 2016 nearly to petroleum
products
.
However
, textile manufacture
export
value
was significantly low as 25
billion
, and it drastically achieve 15.24% more sales in 2016.
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, yet they earn 0.81% more sales in 2016.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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