The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that becoming a successful businessman does not need knowledge from a college, as they can learn by doing in order to build necessary

skills

. From my point of view, I disagree with the idea. In the following paragraphs, I will give my reasons why I think studying at schools is vital for everyone.

Firstly

, one should

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improve oneself both academic and soft

skills

, so learning from universities will enhance students to be knowledgeable and qualified employees.

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, CEOs have to confront

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several problems and issues which require both analytics

skills

and communication

skills

. CEOs who graduated from universities might have better techniques to apply in solving

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critical problems.

Although

, some might say that soft

skills

are difficult to teach.

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any class from

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institutions

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successful

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is having a great connection, and participating in any programs at colleges will help students to meet new people.

For instance

, "Grab platform" , the most powerful mobile application in

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Asia, was built by

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group of students from Harvard University. Co-founders met in an MBA class ,and they came up with the idea

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an innovative

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platform

. It can be seen that networking among successful people is powerful. In conclusion, it might be true that some qualities and competencies could develop outside classrooms.

Nonetheless

, I strongly believe that attending classrooms or joining

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program at institutions is the key success factor to be great leaders

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since we could not only strengthen our abilities but

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of friends.