Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?
In recent years, the decision of having children later has become
increasingly
popular trend. There are several reasons for Add an article
an increasingly
this
phenomenon and I do believe this
has some obvious drawbacks for each family and our community.
There are two main reasons why these days more young adults are choosing against having children when they are in the beginning stage of career
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their career
Firstly
, instead
of embarking on parenthood at the
early age, modern women are likely to Correct article usage
an
pursuit
tertiary education and want to move up their own career ladder. If they got married and had Replace the word
pursue
baby
, the workings mothers would find difficulties in both splitting their time to devote working and taking care Correct article usage
a baby
their
offspring. Change preposition
of their
Secondly
, young
childless Add an article
the young
a young
family
may have a strong feeling of self-enjoyment. Fix the agreement mistake
families
This
lead
them to prefer enjoying their life rather than Change the verb form
leads
by
raising children. Change preposition
apply
For example
, many men may choose to go oversea for leisure travel or for own business while women are apt to take care of their body and socialize with their friends.
On the other hand
, delaying giving birth is no longer every family‘s private affair but also
it affects strongly the survival of a whole nation. This
tendency has negative
influence on old parents and their future kids when the wives decide to have pregnancies. In fact, after 35 years of age, the old mothers may tackle Add an article
a negative
with
the danger of having Change preposition
apply
miscarriage
or delivering difficultly the baby. Add an article
a miscarriage
Moreover
, in case there an
easy delivery of the mothers, the babies are prone to be at risk of having Down‘s syndrome. Add a missing verb
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As a result
, this
can negatively affect the shapers of a nation’s tomorrow and the quality of our future productive workforce.
In conclusion, there are some reasons that many people tend to delay having baby
in their life .Correct article usage
a baby
Consequently
, this
might have negative effects on each individuals
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individual's
families
and our society at large.Fix the agreement mistake
family
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