Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do advantages of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

In recent years, the decision of having children later has become

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popular trend. There are several reasons for

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phenomenon and I do believe

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has some obvious drawbacks for each family and our community. There are two main reasons why these days more young adults are choosing against having children when they are in the beginning stage of

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.

Firstly

,

instead

of embarking on parenthood at

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early age, modern women are likely to

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tertiary education and want to move up their own career ladder. If they got married and had

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, the workings mothers would find difficulties in both splitting their time to devote working and taking care

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offspring.

Secondly

,

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the young

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childless

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families

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may have a strong feeling of self-enjoyment.

This

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them to prefer enjoying their life rather than

by

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raising children.

For example

, many men may choose to go oversea for leisure travel or for own business while women are apt to take care of their body and socialize with their friends.

On the other hand

, delaying giving birth is no longer every family‘s private affair but

also

it affects strongly the survival of a whole nation.

This

tendency has

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influence on old parents and their future kids when the wives decide to have pregnancies. In fact, after 35 years of age, the old mothers may tackle

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the danger of having

miscarriage

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a miscarriage

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or delivering difficultly the baby.

Moreover

, in case there

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easy delivery of the mothers, the babies are prone to be at risk of having Down‘s syndrome.

As a result

,

this

can negatively affect the shapers of a nation’s tomorrow and the quality of our future productive workforce. In conclusion, there are some reasons that many people tend to delay having

baby

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in their life .

Consequently

,

this

might have negative effects on each

individuals

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families

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and our society at large.