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Some people say that with the development of modern technology, printed books, newspapers and magazines lose their importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Certain individuals claim that with the improvement of current technology printed
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,newspapers and magazines failed their interest.I do not completely agree with the notion and
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,newspapers and magazines will remain in existence. The primary reason
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 is
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 easy access to ebooks and the availability of the internet, most people in recent times prefer to read the news online.The major benefit of reading online is that there is an option to increase/decrease the font size.
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,there is another advantage digital
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 are free of cost and we can download hundreds of
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 and store them on laptops or tablets.
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,people who have eyesight are going to have more benefits as they have more options on the internet and in the same way some humans who are more passionate about collecting
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 will have more advantages.
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,I do not believe that technology is going to fully replace the traditional source of information for the newspaper.The main advantage of printed
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 is the eyes will not get strained as they do not emit any raise and
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 it is safe for children
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 and in order to read the
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 we do not require any equipment.
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,most academics are asking children to use library
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 to prepare their assignments to get rid of eye strain if they use computers. Another advantage is that we will get an authoritative source of information.
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 is not the case for online content as anyone can post the content.
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,I would say that Printed
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 and newspapers will surge in the future over ebooks as they have more benefits in Human life
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