The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Its
is being discussed the impacts that the Correct pronoun usage
It
internet
, more specifically, social media
, has in
the way that we communicate nowadays. Change preposition
on
Although
some argue that this
new way of communicating has a favourable outcome, others believe that it had a negative impact in
our society.
On one Change preposition
on
hand
it Add a comma
,hand
its
possible to argue that social Correct your spelling
is
media
and the internet
allow for more people
to be connected, by making possible
that we stay in touch with individuals that Correct pronoun usage
it possible
otherwise
we would not. Therefore
, in this
sense, social media
is bringing people
closer together, facilitating communication and, as a consequence, resulting in a positive development for society. For example
, as a social media
participant, I am connected with people
who
I grew up with or who studied with me and do not live in Brazil anymore. I can find Change the pronoun
whom
an old friends
by searching for them Correct the article-noun agreement
old friends
an old friend
in
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on
a
social Correct article usage
apply
media
, which would otherwise
be very difficult.
On the other hand
, it is also
possible to sustain that being in contact with people
through social media
is too artificial and that we are not connected at all, on the contrary
, we are just learning facts about the
others. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, you could learn from a post that someone else got married or had a child. Probably you would have received that information without internet
. Add an article
the internet
However
, just knowing that information do not you
bring you closer to that person. You still do not know his/her feelings, real situation and so on. In my experience, I rarely talk or write to my friends Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
social Change preposition
on
media
.
To conclude, in my view, social media
has to be used with caution as it may has
more Change the verb form
have
Correct your spelling
than
that
positive Correct your spelling
than
effect
. I do believe that Fix the agreement mistake
effects
internet
and social Correct article usage
the internet
media
are only creating a false sense of connection and creating negative consequences for the
society.Correct article usage
apply
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