Some people think that with the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is being argued that because
people
are spending more
time
using mobile phones and computers, they are
forgeting
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forgetting
how to interact in a
face
to
face
situation. I disagree with
this
opinion as I believe that
the
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interaction through the
Internet
does not change significantly our communication skills. It is a fact that the use of the
Internet
, since its invention, is
growning
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growing
substantially.
This
technology is improving constantly,
in
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an amazing rate, making
the
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access easier and cheaper every day. Nowadays, there is a huge variety of equipment allowing consumers to choose from a cheaper model to a very expensive one.
For example
, when mobile phones were launched in Brazil, there was a waiting list to get one and the price was almost the same as a car.
Further
, the telecommunication providers charged a very high fee. That
also
changed and connection costs are more
accesible
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accessible
. An illustration of
that is
the possibility to buy one month
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acess
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access
for around ten US dollars. As
people
had more access they increased the
time
they spend
navegating
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navigating
online.
However
, spending more
time
connected does not mean necessarily that
people
are not allocating
time
to meet their friends and relatives.
For example
, the
time
used on mobile phones and computers could in the past have
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used for reading newspapers, books
in
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paper or playing games. Actually, the
Internet
makes
possible
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it possible
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for us to
communitate
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communicate
with
people
that live far from us,
thus
creating more
possibily
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possibility
possibly
for interactions.
Finally
,
communications
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communication
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on line
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online
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requires
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almost the same set of skills as
face
to
face
. To conclude, the increase in the usage of online equipment does give new options for spending
time
but it does not have a negative impact on relationships.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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