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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that some animal species are reduced in numbers greatly over time,
thus
 make them on a verge of extinction.
However
, many believe that humans should focus on protecting the type of
animals
 that bring a positive impact on human life rather than make unimportant expenses for kinds of
animals
 that serve no good for us. In my perspective, I completely disagree with that view for two reasons, any
animals
 existence give balance to nature and any
animals
 have equal rights. The
first
 point why we should pay attention to any living creature is
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the reason that every animal existence will
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impact
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 on the ecosystem. Take a snake as an example, admittedly, many people would think that snakes do not provide any benefit to mankind, but if the population of the snake is lowered, it will lead to an increasing number of its natural prey namely mice.
Thus
, people should preserve every animal regardless of its function in our life because there will be always a link between one animal to other
animals
. Another important point that needs us not to be selective in terms of protecting
animals
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the fact that every living being has the same opportunity to live. The fact that some
animals
 give abundances of beneficial impact to humans
such
 as bees which help to spread plants seed not justified that bees are more important than other types of creatures.
Therefore
, despite the role they serve to nature, we need to give them an equal opportunity especially for the ones that are already endangered. In conclusion, whether if
animals
 are advantageous for humans or not is not the factor we should consider when protecting endangered
animals
.
Instead
, we should think that the nonexistence of one species will affect other
animals
, and on top of that, every living thing has the same opportunity to live on earth.
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