Genetic engineering is an important issue in society. Some people think that it will improve people's lives in many ways. Others feel that it might be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, scientific advancement is a part of human life that no one can deny. As a double-edged sword,

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modern approach not only could bring ample benefits to us

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but

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some negative effects. Take genetic engineering

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example, some people believe it as an answer for all health problems, whereas the other think it is a devil trap that danger us. In

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essay, I will cover both

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of

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To begin

with, there are numerous advantages that have been discovered by experts with

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technology, especially related to medical fields.

Firstly

, there were a lot of diseases that

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incurable, now experiencing a major update in their management.

For example

, when we are talking about cancer, some decades ago, the mortality of

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illness was almost 90%. With extensive research in genetic-modifying areas, more and more cures for cancer have been invented.

Thus

,

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condition leads to more people can be saved.

Secondly

,

this

type

of technology will offer a significant improvement in the area of food production.

For instance

, farmers now can increase their agricultural volumes,

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as fruits and vegetables, by using modified seeds.

Moreover

, these

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of plants will

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have more endurance from the insects or disadvantaged environment. On the other,

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of modern scientific progress

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will bring some downsides for the

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life

lives

lifes

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on earth. Because of the increase of

quaility

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quality

in some specific agricultural products, people tend to grow the same

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of plants over and over again. Despite having more on the volume, the variety of the products will be experiencing a major drop.

As a result

, some of the

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will become

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extinct

. In summary, I strongly believe that

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engineering

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technique will improve the

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of our populations. There

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still some negative

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also

, but the advantages will still outweigh the bad ones.

Consequently

, we need to be mindful in

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such

progress in our life.