Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

#tourists #places #conditions #sahara #desert #antartic #visit

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

All over the globe, there are plenty of

places

Use synonyms

in both the hemispheres but nowadays

tourists

Use synonyms

are fond of travelling to areas with extreme conditions which a layman would not think of. There are positive aspects as well as drawbacks of visiting

such

Linking Words

places

Use synonyms

. Both the views are discussed

further

Linking Words

followed by a conclusion. On one hand, there are lots of advantages of paying a visit to

such

Linking Words

places

Use synonyms

Tourists

Use synonyms

get to experience the exact weather conditions. I had once been to

Sahara

Correct article usage

the Sahara

show examples

desert. It was extremely hot and windy. I

also

Linking Words

got an opportunity to

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

see a sand storm at a distant location from ours. You can not feel that by watching a video on

Sahara

Correct article usage

the Sahara

show examples

desert.

Moreover

Linking Words

, they like to go to the North pole and South pole to specifically see the Arctic and Antarctic. The scenarios of dolphins playing and the sun

setting

Change the form of the verb

sets

show examples

are so beautiful. Having a barbeque and bonfire

setup

Correct your spelling

set up

show examples

there while chatting with your friends, is a mesmerizing experience.

On the other hand

Linking Words

such

Linking Words

places

Use synonyms

come with their demerits. To start with,

difficulty

Replace the word

difficult

show examples

in coping up with the climatic challenges. The temperature at the peak of Mount Everest located in the Himalayan ranges

are

Change the verb form

show examples

so extreme during winters that

tourists

Use synonyms

are not allowed to climb

further

Linking Words

than a specific point as it may prove to be fatal because of the low oxygen concentration in the atmosphere.

Linking Words

Correct your spelling

Furthermore

show examples

Further more

Correct your spelling

Furthermore

show examples

, the lack of basic necessities. Few

such

Linking Words

places

Use synonyms

do not have food stalls or restaurants to eat and no lodging available to take rest or freshen up. So, many

mishap

Change to a plural noun

mishaps

show examples

take place due to that.

Tourists

Use synonyms

either die due to suffocation or extreme heat. To conclude,

tourists

Use synonyms

nowadays like visiting

places

Use synonyms

which are challenging but in my opinion they should bear in mind not only the merits

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

but

also

Linking Words

the demerits.

Such

Linking Words

places

Use synonyms

are not for the

faint hearted

Add a hyphen

faint-hearted

show examples

ones.

Submitted by kishengosai on Tue Sep 14 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

315 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4.5
band
People in many countries are spending more and more time away from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, people are working long hours more than spent time with families, because of responsibility of jobs or study at the university. I believe that learnings and developing themselves in live individual and have benefit than live with parents.
4.5
band
Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?
Many research have shown that overeating causes many health issues as smoking does and the public argues that it is necessary to ban some food ads to prevent people from consuming it. However, there are individuals who say it is unnecessary to ban such ads because people only buy it at first but to keep consuming it, it requires the quality of the products. In my perspective, I wholeheartedly disagree with banning certain food ads due to the fact that the nutrition and health organization would not allow the food to be distributed if it is harmful in the first place.
6.5
band
More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the causes. What can be done to solve this problem
These days, wild animals are on the verge of disappearing and others are at risk of extinction. Therefore it is important to look at the causes that have resulted in and will continue resulting in the disappearance of some species, and find possible solutions to halt this problem from continuing.
7
band
Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of these fashions?
In the era of globalization, technology plays a vital role and is involved in many life sectors. Thus, creativity has been avelliated and there are not any new ideas demonstrated. Nevertheless, recently, a wide range of individuals are posting the same things, such as food, clothes and platforms.
8
band
your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she knows that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Tell him /her how you study *Give him /her on advice about the week before the exam. * Explain what to do on the day
I hope this letter finds you in good health and in the best of spirits. I read your previous letter and I am happy to know that you are almost ready for the IPS exam. I really appreciate that you chose me to provide you with some useful suggestions to score well. It is relentlessly vital to concentrate on studies and spend approximately 12-15 hours every day learning.

Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

People in many countries are spending more and more time away from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the causes. What can be done to solve this problem

Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of these fashions?

your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she knows that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Tell him /her how you study *Give him /her on advice about the week before the exam. * Explain what to do on the day

your friend is taking an exam and has asked to you help him/her with studying because he/she knows that you usually do well. write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Tell him /her how you study Give him /her on advice about the week before the exam. Explain what to do on the day