Some people say that the purpose of education for individuals is to be useful to the society, while others argue that the purpose is to fulfill personal ambitions of an individual. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is considered by some
people
that education
for a person is in line with individual’s
personal ambitions, whereas there are others who think that it should be helpful to Correct article usage
an individual’s
the
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apply
society
. While education
is used for the community, I believe that education
will be better for the individual people
to improve their knowledge
.
On the one hand, there are a lot of good ways to use education
for society
– it is to share with
their opinion and Change preposition
apply
knowledge
with other people
. This
is essential to gain important information, such
as professional skills and cultural norms. For example
, there are teachers who share their own experiences. Students take the the
most interesting and the most significant information from teachers in order to know a lot. So, it will be more useful for Remove the redundancy
apply
the
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apply
society
.
On the other hand
, education
take
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takes
people
’s 11 or 12 years not to waste their knowledge
to society
, but to be successful for themselves. In Kazakhstan
there are many schools that can help to find their careers that will be Add a comma
,Kazakhstan
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a benefit
benefit
for their future. Replace the word
beneficial
For instance
, in NIS schools’ student-graduates who study at Nazarbayev University, in order to improve their own knowledge
, work in the best place where they have a good salary. Therefore
, education
should help to
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apply
people
to realise their personal ambitions and dreams.
In conclusion, I will say that there are many good ways to help society
with education
, although
teaching will be better for improving people
's own knowledge
, also
helps people
to be more responsible and useful for development.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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