Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that developed

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should help economically developing nations and provide them with humanitarian

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during catastrophes. I agree

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opinion because the

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have the capability and have the moral obligation to assist those who are in need.

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, the rich

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have the resources to help less developed

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. In terms of equipment, manpower and technology, these

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can immediately reach out to calamity stricken

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to conduct humanitarian relief operations to alleviate the condition of the affected people.

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, the super typhoon “Haiyan” devastated the central part of the Philippines in 2012 that brought disturbance in the country. Most of the relief

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that immediately arrived in the aftermath of the storm came from

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.

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, the

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have to show humanitarian consideration and do morally upright to help during disasters. Their

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in these trying times is important to uplift the morale of the affected population. International communities are keen on observing these actions which

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likely beneficial to the country providing the

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.

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, the Philippine government recognizes the

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of the

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who took part in the rescue and relief operation after the storm,

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, international organization express their gratitude to these

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. In conclusion, I agree that wealthy nations should offer their hands to poorer

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when experiencing

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. The developed

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have the machinery to do humanitarian activities and have

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responsibility to do

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action in the sense of humanitarian considerations.