Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that developed

countries

should help economically developing nations and provide them with humanitarian

assistance

during catastrophes. I agree

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opinion because the

first

world

countries

have the capability and have the moral obligation to assist those who are in need.

Firstly

, the rich

countries

have the resources to help less developed

countries

. In terms of equipment, manpower and technology, these

countries

can immediately reach out to calamity stricken

state

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to conduct humanitarian relief operations to alleviate the condition of the affected people.

For instance

, the super typhoon “Haiyan” devastated the central part of the Philippines in 2012 that brought disturbance in the country. Most of the relief

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that immediately arrived in the aftermath of the storm came from

the

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first

world

countries

.

In addition

, the

first

world

countries

have to show humanitarian consideration and do morally upright to help during disasters. Their

assistance

in these trying times is important to uplift the morale of the affected population. International communities are keen on observing these actions which

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their respect

that is

likely beneficial to the country providing the

assistance

.

For example

, the Philippine government recognizes the

assistance

of the

countries

who took part in the rescue and relief operation after the storm,

further

, international organization express their gratitude to these

countries

. In conclusion, I agree that wealthy nations should offer their hands to poorer

countries

when experiencing

crisis

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situation

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. The developed

countries

have the machinery to do humanitarian activities and have

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responsibility to do

such

action in the sense of humanitarian considerations.