In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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the world. There are numerous reasons

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why the crime rate is accelerating at

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very fast speed. In

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focus on some of the solutions. To commence with, the number one factor contributing to crimes is poverty. A lot of nations are

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facing poverty due to the increase in population and increase in demand for goods and

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, causing people to steal and destroy properties.

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stores in the past few years, mostly by people living on the streets.

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, to decrease theft, subsidies should be provided by the government to the poor, so that, they can buy the bare minimum.

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, the recent development of violent video games and series has

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contributed to

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in crime numbers. These games make people feel less empathy and cause disruption in the public by copying what they see on tv or computer.

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, most of the mass

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at schools and other crowded areas, when investigated are related to these violent images seen on different platforms. Because of

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, the government and the media sector should have

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direct control over what should be shown and focus more awareness programs and

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methods to minimize violence. To conclude, we have seen the destructive nature of violence on both the government and families. A long term solution should be found in order for it to be more peaceful for

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future generations.