Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many people at the present day think that school plays an important role in teaching many students to become a good

person

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in their society. While some people argue that

this

duty should be their

parents

. From my point of view, I think that both school and

parents

have the important duty to teach their

kids

to be good members of society. In the following paragraph, both views of

this

topic will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that

parents

are the

first

teacher of their children. They should teach basic knowledge of being a good person in the community, and many toddlers should be educated about basic survival in various situations by their

parents

.

For example

, the family should teach

kids

not to speak harshly to others, saying thank you after someone makes somethings to them, and saying apologize after they make somethings wrong.

Additionally

,

parents

should educate standard

responsibility

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to their

kids

such

as keeping and cleaning toy

station

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by themselves after they play

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.

However

, these duties depend not only on fathers and mothers but

also

on many

teachers

in the school. Many

teachers

should educate their students in terms of

advance

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knowledge and information.

For instance

, the

teachers

should educate their pupils to correctly use the roles, duties and freedoms of their pupils in the right way.

Furthermore

, the basic law should be taught by the

teachers

due to some

parents

do not have the right information to teach their

kids

, and the

teachers

should take the punishment lessons to their students, like if they make somethings illegal, how will they be punished? In conclusion, I strongly believe that both

parents

and

teachers

play an important role in the improvement of their toddlers to be a good

person

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people

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in the future.

Therefore

, it is recommended that collaborating with

parents

and

teachers

to make children

to

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be good members

in

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the community is the best way.