Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is widely believed that having a great teacher is the most important

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of education.

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, some people argue that attitudes are the key

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studying. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both of these viewpoints in detail before a conclusion is reached. On the one hand, it is undeniable that professors have significantly influenced children, as

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students

have to go to schools and interact with teachers.

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positive

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and mindsets so that pupils can learn from the role models.

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, in Thailand, there are many

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who followed

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Nong, a famous educator and doer. He devoted himself

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poor

students

because he believed that everyone should

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a chance to study.

As a result

, his children became successful activists and businessmen.

Hence

, one cannot deny that learning from great teachers is vital.

On the other hand

, some pupils ,having

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mindset, can

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by themselves, since they can develop their skills and

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owning to their passions.

For instance

, Keiko, a young girl from Japan, demonstrates how to applying blockchain technology in

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industry. Obviously, it was not

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could learn from her primary school.

In contrast

, she found out that

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topic was interesting and did self-learning.

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positive attitudes could lead one towards a goal. In conclusion, both gaining

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directions from excellent lecturers and having growth mindsets are vital for children.

Furthermore

, I strongly believe having both aspects will help

students

to maximize their abilities and

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successful people in the future.