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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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In some countries,
people
 usually say that the young generation is the backbone of their country. At present time the population of the younger generation is more as compared to older
people
. I am going to explain the advantages and disadvantages in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, older folks has more experience of life and
work
 as compared to the young adults, they need someone to guide them through bad situations which already faced by older
people
 in their times.
For example
, if someone recently joined
work
 and that person is young and never worked before, that person definitely needs a proper training of that
work
 and in that
case
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 most of the old fells help them to understand the
work
. Their life experiences and stories help the younger ones to build their future. On the flip side, adults are more active and productive as compared to older masses. It's scientifically proven that older
people
 after passing their 60s started losing their stamina, eyesight and they cannot
work
 for too long,
hence
 they are more prone to serious injuries.
For example
, In most of the warehouse or factories, they hire young
people
 with age between 20 to 40 because they are more active in the job and has the ability to learn fast, In most of the duties like heavy lifting, moving things from one area to another they use younger fells ,not the older ones. In most cases, these young
people
 become managers and supervisors for their company after hustling for a long time. In
last
, I just want to say that, we need everyone in our lives, life is all about sharing and caring. Where old
people
 share their knowledge with the newer generation. We
also
 have to take care of them, help them do the
work
. After ,all we are humans.
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