Some people believe that annual exams are the best way of assessment while others believe that regular appraisals are better. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both

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system.While,some thinks that yearly examinations for

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of the people think daily basis evaluations are better than that.In

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and demerits of each

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annual exams positives and negatives. Apparently,the main benefit of

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other personal or family problems during the annual

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conducted in our institution,Unfortunately,just prior to my

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regular appraisals advantages and disadvantages. Tacitly,it is the best way of evaluating

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every day and give an internal mark,

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school with enough

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is,people just

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,most of them won't try to understand what they are studying,for

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run it will not help them,they won't be able to apply what they studied now in future. To conclude, both

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own positive sides and negative sides.

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prefer daily basis evaluation rather than

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basis with proper

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, that they should learn things not only for getting marks in

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for their future.

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