Some people believe that annual exams are the best way of assessment while others believe that regular appraisals are better. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of both

In
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advanced world,science and technology have helped improve all aspects of life,even in
education
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system.While,some thinks that yearly examinations for
students
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excellent choice of evaluating,
rest
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of the people think daily basis evaluations are better than that.In
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essay, I will illustrate
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and demerits of each
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.
Firstly
,
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will discuss
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annual exams positives and negatives. Apparently,the main benefit of
this
method
is that,not only, it can
mesure
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measure
students
long time memory power , but
also
, they can have a
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day-to-day school life.Whereas,the main drawback of
this
method
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if the candidate
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sick or
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other personal or family problems during the annual
exam
time, it will spoil his/her whole
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effort.
For instance
, I can tell it from my experience.I was preparing one year exclusively for a medical entrance
exam
after my higher secondary education,
i
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was doing well in all mock
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conducted in our institution,Unfortunately,just prior to my
exam
,
i
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was diagnosed with
chicken pox
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- it is a communicable disease,so
i
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have to be isolated for a
purticular
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particular
period,
therefore
i
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couldn't attend the
exam
,
hence
I lost my precious one year there.
Secondly
, I will note
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regular appraisals advantages and disadvantages. Tacitly,it is the best way of evaluating
students
capability.
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The teacher
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Teacher
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Teachers
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can notice the changes of a student
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every day and give an internal mark,
therefore
they will be very obedient and disciplined in class.One of the best
benifits
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benefits
of
this
method
is ,kids will
come
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school with enough
preperation
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preparation
,and they will be very active in class.At the same time,
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disadvantage of
this
is,people just
muggup
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mug up
the study material and
next
day they just present it in front of
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the teacher
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,most of them won't try to understand what they are studying,for
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run it will not help them,they won't be able to apply what they studied now in future. To conclude, both
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have
its
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own positive sides and negative sides.
However
,
i
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prefer daily basis evaluation rather than
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a yearly
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basis with proper
guidence
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guidance
to
students
, that they should learn things not only for getting marks in
this
level
,
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but
also
for their future.
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