Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,a
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of individuals use
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as their primary source of
news
.A chunk of individuals opines that even the rising popularity of digital
news
cannot replace the newspaper whilst others are
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about it.I,
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believe that
this
trend will continue to grow and will become dominant over alternative sources of
news
.
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will likely
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become
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vital method of getting information because of various reasons.
Firstly
,it offers
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lightning
access to
news
around the clock .
Moreover
,with the
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ease
case
of modern gadgets a person can have the latest update of
news
anywhere regarding the location.
Secondly
,another aspect of
news
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is we can share it with multiple people
also
can comment on
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and discuss them with other people,give our views,and even contribute with our own updates on social media.
For instance
, one can see the video related to the article which is even more interesting.Another feature ,
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can be bookmarked and read it later.
On the other hand
,
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are
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reliable sources of information.As articles are written by
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professional
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and they write the posts after adequate scrutiny and
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.
Hence
,they are the most trusted among individuals as
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to the digital
news
as anyone on
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can write anything.
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conclusion,I disagree with the view that
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will continue to be the main source of
news
,
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because
i
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believe that
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will soon
to
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be equally important.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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