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you recently attended a meeting at a hotel. when you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter say where you think you have left the papers explain why they are so important tell the manager what you want him/her to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
 letter in relation to my visit
in
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 your esteemed hotel
last
thursday
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Thursday
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 on 15th
september
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September
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 2021. I was very happy throughout my stay there and was completely relaxed until I reached home and soon realized that I have left my work document in the hotel itself. I have left it in
the
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room number 2506, in the drawer
next
 to the bed. I am very much anxious at the moment, as these papers are very much confidential and important for me. It contains legal information related to the organisation where I am working at the moment and
also
 it needed to be submitted to the MSD within the
last
 week of
this
 month. I would be really
thankfull
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thankful
 to you, if you could help me in
this
 situation, by collecting it from the room by yourself and
also
 by sending it through speed post. I would make the payment for it through my credit card. I have attached my postal address along with
this
 letter. I hope to hear from you soon. Thanking you Yours sincerely Neethu Babu
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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