It is common for people to travel long distances for work and study. Some argue that longer commute times affect people in a negative way while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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A highly controversial issue today relates to whether spending
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time
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to arrive at work and institutions of education affect people negatively or not. In
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essay, I am going to examine
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question from both points of view and
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explain why I believe the arguments for the side effects are stronger. There are people who argue that the disadvantages of
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long distances considerably outweigh its benefits. The main reason for believing
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is that the amount of
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to arrive
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the destination could be used in many useful ways,
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as having breakfast with
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or running in the park. It is
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possible to say that spending a long
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transportation could increase the level of stress and bring diseases. To illustrate, the feeling of anxiety when you arrive at work late due to the heavy traffic.
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, others believe that
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committing
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has some advantages. It is often argued that it is a precious self-
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. People often have
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opinion because, for somebody,
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is the most relaxing
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of the day. A
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point is that individuals could use
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moment to execute a
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task simultaneously and acquire
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knowledge
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, listening to a podcast or audiobook. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance,
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, I feel that travelling long distances to work or study could bring negatives effects in a short period of
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.
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is because after a period of
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some individuals could starting to
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wonder
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why they still spend their precious hours in transport and not in another better option
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