Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many
people
argue that an individual’s ethnic personalities and other special indentifical
issues are affected by their hometowns directly. Yet, geographical effects are how important on Correct your spelling
identical
a
cultural development of a person whether fully crucial or not. In my opinion, Remove the article
apply
country
of origin is playing enormous
role to define Add an article
an enormous
the enormous
communuties’
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communities
culture
. People’s
ethnic identifies and their main countries are not be helded
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held
seperately
.
On the one hand, a number of Correct your spelling
separately
people
accepted that a person’s culture
are
not affected directly Change the verb form
is
from
their Change preposition
by
country
of origin. As a reason of
Change preposition
for
this
thought, adults create their language, abilities and other identifical
facts by themselves. Correct your spelling
identical
identifiable
For instance
, a friend of mine who is living in Turkey is from Germany, but she get used to live
Change the verb form
living
as
Turkish public as well. She does not cook any German traditional foods and she does not Change preposition
in
listen
any German conventional songs. She carries only a lack of believes from her homeland when she Add the preposition
tolisten
spend
time with her relatives. The cultural Change the verb form
spends
identify
is not a reflection of Replace the word
identity
people’s
country
because people
have a vital qualification: adaptation.
On the other hand
, some people
believe that people’s
own culture
and their country
of origin is inseperable
facts. Correct your spelling
inseparable
This
is because people
get used to talk
, behave and live like what they gain features from their Change the verb form
talking
geograpghy
and these consequences can not change easily. As Correct your spelling
geography
a
Change the article
an
essantial
example, my mother is from Istanbul, Correct your spelling
essential
although
she has been living since 1990 in Moscow and her abilities are the same with
other Turkish Change preposition
as
people
. Communuties
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Communities
are reflect
Change the verb form
are reflecting
attitutes
of their countries where they come from.
In conclusion, a person’s Correct your spelling
attitudes
culture
is affected by their homeland, but density
of effect Add an article
the density
is depend
on Change the verb form
depends
people’s
personal characters. In some cases, individuals are directly show
their state’s cultural effects, Change the verb form
are directly showing
on the contrary
, in some cases
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,cases
people
are affected negligible
when comparing with each other.Change the adjective
negligibly
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