Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Helping others is one of the greatest virtues and rich

countries

can do help

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. Presently, an argument has been put forward that economically stable

nations

assist developing

nations

with financial support but it does not solve the primary issue of poverty.

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why

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of help should be given to undeveloped

countries

. In my opinion, rich

countries

can provide healthcare facilities, advanced education

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to poor

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reason

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why people think that providing other types of amenities to developing states is the best way to do help. One is that wealthy

nations

can transfer goods and food to poorer areas to reduce the high level of poverty and starvation as well as they can establish organizations to provide modern facilities like advanced education, healthcare facilities and so on. Another factor is that developed

nations

can provide job opportunities

also

as they can open factories, multinational companies in poor

countries

. If these organizations are

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economically states, they will get employment, which will definitely

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helpful

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to develop the economy of undeveloped

countries

. On the other side, giving financial aid is fruitful for developing

countries

as country leader knows that where and how much money needs to be invested.

However

, sometimes it is not beneficial because it may

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the risk of corruption and make the citizens lethargic of undeveloped states

also

. Since people of poor

countries

will depend on rich

countries

in every implication. To conclude, as per my above discussion, I opine that wealthy

nations

should build educational institutions, MNCs, hospitals in economically developing

countries

to mitigate the problem of poverty.

Therefore

, they should provide help in

such

ways

instead

of financial support.