Doctors Should Be Responsible For Educating Their Patients About how to improve their health. Do you agree or not.

It is argued that the medical staff should be

helded

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held

responsible for teaching

patients

about

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general health knowledge. I totally agree with the argument, and in

this

essay

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I will state the reasons for my belief. The

first

evidence for my position is that

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doctors and nurses are well trained and

practiced

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on different diseases.

Hence

, they can increase the awareness of individuals on how to stay healthy without extra

efforts

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.

For instance

, out-

patients

can ask the practitioner any questions related to

reasons

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of

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their visit to the clinic during the examination period

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in order

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in-order

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to acquire more information about how to recover sooner. The specialists will be always glad to give their

advises

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.

Therefore

, the doctor is the most appropriate person to answer questions related to staying healthy. Another reason for my view

are

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patients

themselves. Obviously,

a sick persons

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a sick person

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would listen to

guidances

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and instructions given to them by

trusted

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side, which in

this

case can not be more than the healthcare giver.

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,

thsoe

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those

who suffer from weakness and

abetite

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appetite

problems must adhere

with

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the prescriptions indicated by the Nutrition-Doctor.

As a result

, they would overcome all the illness

problem

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and can avoid falling

in

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similar situations in the future. To conclude, I would stand with the opinion of assigning the medical caregivers for educating customers on better healthy daily life practices.

This

is because, they are the best to do

this

task because of their skills background, and

patients

normally

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full trust in them. Having said

this

, educating

patients

on improving their health would save numerous financial

resourses

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resources

spent on health.