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Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the countryside? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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City
 Life is more active and
offer
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 more opportunities. In my opinion, the countryside
offer
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less
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 benefits compared to
City
 life . I will give more details about my opinion in the following paragraph.
Firstly
, the
city
 is the
place
 where
majority
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the majority
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 of the population lives.
This
 is the best
place
 to develop , show and increase
once
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one
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 potential as
individual
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an individual
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.
For instance
 , someone from the countryside who
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has
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as
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has
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 been living with the same routine in the same environment will be confronted
to
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 a new lifestyle.He will face different challenges and have no choice
than
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 to adapt himself to his new environment.
This
 new adaptation can help him develop new skills and bring out his true potential while facing some difficulties.
Furthermore
 , the
city
 is the best
place
 to start a business. Because of the urge growth in population, once product can be known in a short period of time .
This
 will have
positive
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 influence on future sales .
Moreover
, The competition among companies shops and
salers
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sales
 within the society can push us to be more creative and take us out of our
confort
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comfort
 zone.
For example
, a farmer who wants to increase his commerce can go to the
city
 to get wholesalers who can buy his products .
This
 will help
him
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growth
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 in sales , getting new customers as well as adding new strategies to have a quality product
which
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 can make him popular among people. To conclude, the
city
 is the best
place
 to grow once business and
also
 boost once potential as individuals .
In
addition
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 it is the best
place
 to find
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an opportunity
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opportunity
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 as well as meeting new people who can take us to the
next
 level in life.
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