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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

#people #countryside #cities #towns #development
Certain
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 amount of youth
have
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 been tending to shift urban areas while letting only elders
to
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live in the villages.
However
, the influx of youths to larger cities have optimistic points on
development
,
although
 significant negative impacts have been arising with
mentioned
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the mentioned
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 issue.
This
 essay will incline with the latter view and I will mention
both
 positive and negative impacts while giving proper arguments. Anticipating a better life, the trend of
young
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 generation crossing born borders towards urban capitals has been creating notable
issues
 in
both
 social and developmental aspects. The low youth workforce in rural areas drastically increasing, where
begin
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 with agriculture and industrials
labor
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labour
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 force,
moreover
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,moreover
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 extend to innovative
enterpreneurships
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entrepreneurship
 and
in
contrast
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,contrast
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 it has been creating enormous competition to the limited resources in urban areas, which highly impact on sustainable
development
 of a country. Rather than developmental matters, sensible social and personal
issues
 have been creating which directly involve in
mental
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the mental
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wellbeing
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well-being
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 of elders
whom
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who
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 live alone in the countryside , like elderly depressions, anxiety disorders, Bipolar disorders which leads
person
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a person
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 to serious physical health
issues
 like Insomnia, High blood pressure and strokes.
Therefore
, adolescents moving towards
capitals
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capital
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 have been creating tremendous
issues
 in
both
 quantitative and qualitative aspects of the
development
 of a country.
Conversely
, influx youth towards metropolitan have positive outcomes which grow an individual in
both
 personal and social forms. As they have more access to higher studies and career
development
, youths have been enforcing with skills and experience whom ready to compete with
world
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the world
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 by knowledge and talents rather being trapped to locally or regionally. To conclude, though the young generation moving towards capitals by leaving
olders
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holders
 at countryside have been reaching its climax , by improving infrastructures and opportunities on born sites will give fair solution to
both
 younger and older generations to overcome negatives while improving the positives to the
soceity
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society
city
.
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