Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

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Every species in
this
world including
humans
is a part of an environmental cycle. Some people say that we should only save those
animals
which are beneficial to people in their daily life, which is true.
However
, I disagree with the claim because other
animals
are
also
for
nature
balance.
Humans
are depending on some of the
animals
such
as cows, buffalo, goats, camels and so on. But wild
animals
are
also
a part of the environment. In the environmental ,cycle every animal are depending on another one, one way or another. We know that deer feed from the grass or tree and it becomes food for the line. After the death of a wild animal its prey mixed with the soil of the earth.
This
creates fertilizer which is useful for grass to grow and again ecosystem begin from grass and it's a continuous process. In
this
process there are many other
animals
including wild
animals
are essential for keeping
nature
stable.
Moreover
, keeping all the
animals
safe will help
humans
in another way too.
For instance
, there are many incidences happened recently, wild
animals
such
as lions, tigers are coming outside from the jungle and they are making target the human as their food source.
This
is happening because they are unable to find food in the forest.
Hence
, if we protect all the
animals
in
this
world
then
these problems can be solved.
However
, there are some negative points of saving too many
animals
. If the number of forest
animals
becomes more they release from the jungle and hunt the people of the societies. So it cannot be tolerable if
animals
number become unstable it directly affect
nature
and the cycle become uncontrolled. To recapitulate, it's the responsibility of
humans
to protect all the
animals
in
this
world. Which can keep
nature
is stable and treat them equally.
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