You have seen a job advertisement in some newspaper. Write a letter to your friend asking him to consider this job. Please say: - Where have you seen the ad? - What is the job description? - Why do you think, he is a suitable candidate for it?

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Dear Shweta, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health. Yesterday

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I was browsing through the internet I came across a job posting for a salesforce co-ordinator at Illumin, and

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know

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something you will be interested in. The requirements and responsibilities are very similar to the job that you were trying to achieve.

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, they want someone with 2 years' experience in the IT field and a BE in software development,

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, I believe since you have 3 years of experience working as a salesforce admin and you meet the qualifications required for

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role it could be a big step in your professional career.

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, I have a LinkedIn connection who is employed at Illumin, and I quickly asked him a couple of questions regarding the work culture and company atmosphere and the response was quite positive. Please check it out and let me know if you have any questions as I can forward my connections to you. regards, Krushang Patel

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Grammar and Mechanics

Ensure correct capitalization, especially for company names and other proper nouns.

Task Achievement

Consider adding more details about the company and job location for a more complete response.

Content Coverage

The letter efficiently covers all the requested points: where the job was seen, job description, and why the friend is suitable.

Tone

The tone is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

Structure and Organization

The letter is logically structured with clear sequencing of ideas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

166 words

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