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Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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People
 have conflicting views about is it necessary to ensure the difference in earnings of the richest and the poorest is small.
Although
 a small
gap
 between the rich and poor may improve the life quality of poor
people
.There are more possibilities to make the economy go backwards. on the one hand,from the perspective of some optimists, there may be great benefits to decreasing the
gap
 between the rich and the poor.it is likely a small
gap
 would give poor
people
 more chances to solve problems in their life.
for example
, medical insurance could be the most basic insurance for everyone,
people
 can go to the hospital and not be worried about the cost.what is more, with a small
gap
,poor kids suffering from poor education can be taught much better
,
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 than they would have more opportunities for poor
people
 to find a job with high salary.
on the other hand
, a small
gap
 between different levels of
people
 will make a decrease in our economy. the
first
 reason is that high-tech
people
 pay less attention to their work when they have almost the same salary as normal work
people
.
secondly
,a small difference in earnings would discourage children from learning because they will get the same pay no matter how hard they work. personally, I do not agree with the small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. in the long run, I believe it is better to have a big
gap
 between different levels.
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