Some people will believe that robots will replace classroom teacher in the future. To what extend do you agree or disagree

Robots
are machines which
is
Change the verb form
are
show examples
supposed to be useful for the human race. It is believed that
robots
are replaced with
human
Add an article
a human
show examples
teacher
Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
show examples
in the
forseen
Correct your spelling
foreseen
future. According to my perspective, I disagree with
this
statement and mentioned the possible reasons for the same.
To begin
,
Correct your spelling
in order
show examples
inorder
Correct your spelling
in order
show examples
to install
artifical
Correct your spelling
artificial
intelligence in schools and colleges
instead
of a human teacher; the authorities need to
be spend
Change the verb form
spend
show examples
a big chunk of money to buy an advanced robot to teach.
This
may cause huge money loss to the management.
Moreover
, a robotic teacher is less flexible compared to the human one.
An
Correct article usage
Artifical
show examples
artifical
Correct your spelling
artificial
intelligence based
Add a hyphen
intelligence-based
show examples
machines
Fix the agreement mistake
machine
show examples
have already programmed lessons and they continuously
teaches
Change the verb form
teach
show examples
the students without
take
Change the verb form
taking
show examples
care of
the
Change the word
their
show examples
emotions.
Hence
, it may cause to score low grades by the pupils.
For example
, recently a study conducted by the department of information technology of the World Health Organisation proved that students who have been taught by
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
robots
are scored bad grades
in contrast
with the students who have been taught by
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
human instructor.
Additionally
,
robots
can work 24 hours in 7 days without any tiredness and payment but a human educator need wages for the work.
Thsi
Correct your spelling
This
aspect is more
favorable
Change the spelling
favourable
show examples
to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
educational management. Perhaps, it will
generates
Change the verb form
generate
show examples
upemployment
Correct your spelling
unemployment
up employment
employment
problems
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
the
teachers
and can affect the whole economical balance of society.
For example
, in China, a school named
xyz
Correct your spelling
XYZ
Xyz
has installed A.I. (
Artifical
Correct your spelling
Artificial
Intelligence) based classrooms in 2020.
This
can cause some
teachers
get
Add the particle
to get
show examples
fired from the job.
As a result
, the
teachers
cannot able to financially support their family members and
hence
, they
suffers
Change the verb form
suffer
show examples
from poverty. To sum up, the advancement of the technology in
educational
Add an article
the educational
show examples
sector is a vital part of a developing country. But,
due to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
some factors
such
as high maintenance cost, less efficiency and unemployment prevents classroom
teachers
replaced with
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
robots
.
Submitted by Anju on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: