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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

#museums #art #galleries #charge #admission #fees #entry
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It is often argued that
people
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 should not pay for entry to
museums
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 and other expeditions whereas other
people
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 think we need to spend
money
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 on fees.
This
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 essay will discuss why spending
money
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 on entrance fees has more benefits than not charging. On the one hand,
art
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 or other works is an idea of other
people
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 that do not belong to us. We need to respect and not devalue other works. Almost all artists works are represented in
art
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 galleries or
museums
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 and we can support them by paying the fees for entry because they
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 earn the
money
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 from our support. As well as they have encouraged and inspired them to improve and produce new workpieces.
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, Thailand has lots of contemporary
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museums
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 where teenagers prefer to hang out with their friends and they always buy the ticket for entrance,
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 the artist can produce incredible artworks.
On the other hand
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, every place needs
money
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 for maintenance. The owner has to expend the fund on developing and maintaining costs
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 as cleaning the floor and
art
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 pieces, guards for looking after
people
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 and workpieces.
For example
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, the owner of the contemporary
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 museum "Jitti" in Thailand revealed the information that she must pay the electrical cost and
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 buy workpieces that are extremely expensive from famous artists.
However
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, Even if it is not business
museums
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 or galleries
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 as local
museums
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 that accumulate a lot of antiques. The government should allow everyone to enter and do not have any extra charges because they use our tax to maintain them. In conclusion, some public or local
museums
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 should not gather
money
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 from
people
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.
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, the business
museums
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 and
art
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 expedition places that acquire the
money
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 from
people
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 have advantages that outweigh the drawbacks because they are used for enhancing and maintaining places and artists.
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