Should humans adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point of view?

It is supposed by many that humankind should adapt to
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technological advancement, whereas, others are of
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opinion.
Besides
that, it is said that
technology
is making us less intelligent.
However
, I am an advocate of the view that to survive in
this
world we should accept high-end technical changes.
Moreover
, I certainly feel that
this
change in culture is making us dumb.
Firstly
, considering the external
enviornment
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, I strongly believe that we should become familiar with the latest scientific know-how.
For example
, if we look at the evolution of Mobile phones, we could understand that how crucial it is to proceed forward with the generation. In nearly a decade, we moved from the key-pad to touch phones.
In addition
to that, previously it was extremely expensive;
hence
, making it challenging for the commoners to afford it. Nowadays,
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pricing is so
competative
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that everybody could buy it easily.
Furthermore
, even the senior citizens are learning and honing their skills, in order to, connect with their near and dear ones and to survive in
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.
However
, I hold the viewpoint that the shift of mankind towards technological dependence is not conducive towards their intellect.
For instance
, before the invention of
internet
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, when we had doubts
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certain subjects, we used to refer
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books in order to resolve that.
Thus
, it had facilitated us to improve our knowledge on a plethora of topics.
Nevertheless
, today's youths rely on "Google" to answer their questions,
therefore
, they are lacking on extensive learning.
This
definitely
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their expertise. To conclude, there are contradictory views in society regarding the fact that whether
technology
should be adapted as per the needs, or it should be the opposite.
Also
, it is said that
technology
is creating an adverse impact on the rationality of humans. Personally, I am in favour of the idea that human beings should adapt themselves to technological
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, as well as it is a fact that the boom in
technology
is hampering the intelligence of people.
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