As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. What are the causes of this trend and what are the effects on society?
Nowadays, Both economy and technology have a rapid development in many countries. And there are a fair amount of inhabitants who prefer to live individually or in small family units. The reasons behind
this
phenomenon are multiple. And I believe it is a negative effect on society
.
Regarding the causes, there are two main reasons that contribute to the development of this
style. Firstly
, people do not have time to communicate with other ones
, such
as the workers are extremely busy at work and tired post their shift. Consequently
, they really want to relax lonely without playing with others. Additionally
, each person in this
modern society
has their own smart device, such
as smartphones, tablets, or laptops. They tend to focus on their personal device even when meeting other ones
. 50 per cent of young people will tend to live individually if they usually use smartphones while meeting friends, according to the research from Havard University.
The trend will bring some negative impacts on the society
of nations that are experiencing this
. Firstly
, the family connection will be loosening because of this
living style. For example
, a son or a daughter who did not talk to the parents for a while because of living far from their parents will lose connection easily. Furthermore
, people who do not want to expose to society
will get stress easier than the opposite ones
. As a result
, those ones
tend to find death because they feel stressed and they do not know which ones
they should share feelings with. According to recent research, 30% of the young generation in Korea is feeling stressed and they used to think about death.
In conclusion, having heavy workloads and abusing smart devices are the reasons that lead to the growth of living in small family groups in this
modern world. This
not only affects negatively the connection between parents and children, but it also
impacts the mental health of the young generation.Submitted by 2076408749 on
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