Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?
It is undeniable to state that our lives, for now, are not related to modern understandable . No few of employee is unemployed because of lacking modern
technology
. Technology
has changed lots of living patterns including working. The modern affects both advantages and drawbacks. Even though communities would like to see only benefits, disadvantages affect the society as well as the advantages they get.
The changing patterns of living and working are caused by modern technology
. It is fastened all route of the society. For instance
, transportation has changed as a faster and longer machine. As well as, communication in companies are more convenient that make the connections or network spread out quickly. Therefore
, people
need to learn new things that are hard
Replace the word
hardly
Change preposition
to
skills
. The more benefits people
who adapt the useful and modern skills
earn. The more drawbacks people
who have no wealth to reach those skills
get. Inequality is clearer nowadays.
The development of technology
is not arisen by the good but also
the bad. The weakness of the network in each company is always present that is
a target of terrorists. The hackers who have skills
would find out the solutions to steal either information
or money. Moreover
, most of the information
is on the internet that is
easily reachable. If the internet security does not protect well or people
do not keep their information
properly, the terrorists will use the information
any way they want.
In conclusion, modern technology
gain inequality to people
with changed living patterns. The unadaptive employee is not able to compete in the present companies. The weakness of technology
always arises that is
the target of terrorists to steal either information
or money. Reliable websites as quality security are necessary for communities.Submitted by sahapol.rs on
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