The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays,

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an important factor in many countries and many developing countries would like to educate the adults who have missed the opportunity of going to school at a younger

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,

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, some budget is required to spend on it. I agree with the given statement as it has many positive aspects of providing

education

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.

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, I will help many mid-ageing individuals to find a job in the market,

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people who

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miss

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the opportunity of going to school during primary

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due to lack of proper

infracstructure

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infrastructure

and some financial issues. They would like to study and find a job in an organization.

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will help them to support

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their

familes

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families

and have a better standard of living, Which eventually has any

postive

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positive

development in the country economy.

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, The

government

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has to provide a proper

education

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system by

bulding

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building

and providing some financial support to them, By giving them some view of the

furture

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future

and job opportunity so

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will encourage them to study .

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, the

government

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has

spend

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some budget to educate their

middle

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middle-age

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age

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population by providing them

some

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with some

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certification

course

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courses

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. Which will help them to get certain specific jobs and

supported

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with some loans

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so that they can do their own business. Overall, the

government

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had

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spend

certain

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a certain

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budget

for

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on

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educating the adults.

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,

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adults would not like to study after a certain

age

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. Because they might have settled well in the family business. Spending money on the construction of school buildings and hiring teachers can be a loss to the

government

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and can impact the country growth. To conclude, providing an

education

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for people who can not read and write is very essential, as it will help individuals and society for better living and can have a positive impact on the country.