Big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that human being has to
work
throughout their
life
span to spend
life style
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lifestyle

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in a better and comfortable way. One can believe high remuneration from a
job
is paramount than
fulfilling
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a fulfilling

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one. In my point of view
job
gratification will cater to
demand
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the demand

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of high productivity at
work
and as well as their personal
life
.
To begin
with, society nowadays is
mostely
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mostly

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money oriented
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and based on
this
situation employees have to
work
so hard since their responsibilities and targets which they need to be
acheived
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achieved

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at
work
.
Consequently
,
work
pressure is developed because of
thier
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busy
shedules
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schedules

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and confront health issues
such
as high blood pressure, heart attack and diabetes.
Furthermore
,
two
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third
of their typical days have been dedicated
for
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the
job
.
Hence
, family relations are disrupted ,as they will not be able to spend time together and it leads to mental
disatisfaction
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dissatisfaction
satisfaction

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. Mental well being is far
imparative
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to have
sense
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of achievement at
work
than big pay.
Therefore
,
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majority

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mojority
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of the people have considered that
the
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inner peace is far greater than
high
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a high

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amount of wages.
Nevertheless
, following prefer working environment can
leads
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to
carrer
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career

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growth whereas engaged with
unfavorable
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working
condition
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conditions

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. The research
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conducted

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conduced
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by UK
sientists
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scientists

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stated that there is a strong relationship between fulfilled
job
and productivity.
Moreover
, fulfilling one can
leads
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to
excell
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their productivity and get better results than others who put a high salary on priority. In conclusion ,
work
fulfillment
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is remarkable for mental stability and as well as advancement in
life
rather than
high
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a high

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salary
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