Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that spending money on the protection of wild
animals
is pointless. I completely disagree with
this
opinion. From my point of view, it is absurd to argue that wild
animals
have no place in
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century. I believe that wild
animals
are a part of the earth so we have no right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species.
Furthermore
, there is no reason why we should let
animals
die out. Others say that wild
animals
take up a lot of
land
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. I think it is
wrong
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idea because there is a lot of
land
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for us to live with wild
animals
.
Secondly
, I disagree with idea that protecting wild
animals
is
waste
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of resources. I think one of our problems is
protection
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of natural habitats because it is incredibly important for people and it ensures the survival of wild
animals
.
This
problem is indispensable for both. The natural habitats produce oxygen for people and stabilise the earth’s climate. So if we destroyed these areas, the costs of solving problems would far out with the costs of conservation. In conclusion, by protecting wild
animals
and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on earth.
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