Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities to study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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skills
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some people will be good in studies
but
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, at the same time other few will be having
skills
like singing, dancing or painting and all.
However
, without understanding
this
,
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people do debate
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this
topic. In my viewpoint, the
schools
should admit all
kind
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of
students
without seeing their academic abilities alone.
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essay will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, the county not only needs scientists, doctors or lawyers but
also
the county wants talented people from all other fields
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persons,
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, and actors. To elaborate, if the
schools
take admissions based on the
students
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academic performance it can cause psychological stress to other pupils.
Moreover
, if all the
students
became professionally skilled, they may face drastic unemployment issues in future.
In addition
,
this
may initiate unnecessary competitions among
students
.
On the contrary
, if the
schools
admit differently skilled
students
and
also
encourage them to achieve their dreams can bring pride to the nation.
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, if a person
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Olympic
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medal for his country, nobody will ask about his academic performance
instead
everyone will feel
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for his achievement.
In addition
, admitting differently talented pupils can share their ideas with each
others
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and
this
can help them to develop more
skills
. Apart from these, pupils even can be more confident in their activities.
Finally
, the
schools
should understand that individuals are different but everyone has their own potential abilities. In
this
way, my opinion is the
schools
should respect the
students
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skills
in all manner irrespective of academic abilities alone.
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