Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities to study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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another skill

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some people will be good in studies

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, at the same time other few will be having

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like singing, dancing or painting and all.

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, without understanding

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people do debate

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topic. In my viewpoint, the

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should admit all

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of

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without seeing their academic abilities alone.

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essay will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.

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with, the county not only needs scientists, doctors or lawyers but

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the county wants talented people from all other fields

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like sports

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, and actors. To elaborate, if the

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take admissions based on the

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students

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academic performance it can cause psychological stress to other pupils.

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, if all the

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became professionally skilled, they may face drastic unemployment issues in future.

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,

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may initiate unnecessary competitions among

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, if the

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admit differently skilled

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encourage them to achieve their dreams can bring pride to the nation.

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, if a person

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Olympic

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medal for his country, nobody will ask about his academic performance

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everyone will feel

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for his achievement.

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, admitting differently talented pupils can share their ideas with each

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and

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can help them to develop more

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. Apart from these, pupils even can be more confident in their activities.

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, the

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should understand that individuals are different but everyone has their own potential abilities. In

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way, my opinion is the

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should respect the

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students

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skills

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in all manner irrespective of academic abilities alone.